5. My first oral prsentation

Exrcice 1:
Yes, I used resources. I had made a power point with some pictures of the girls. I think that they were attractive, and relevant. I looked at my audience all the time, moving my eyes around the room and I didn’t read from my notes. I only had to look at them to know when I had to pass the pictures of my power point. I think that I moved my arms, but I’m not sure.
I think that my topic was interesting but the information was superficial. I had checked my grammar and I had looked up the dictionary for new words and expressions. I’ve tried to use sentence linkers but I think that I haven’t done it.
Yes! :D I know how to pronounce all the words that I used, because Marc Barneda had listened and helped me.
I think that my speed and fluency were good, but if was too short. I tried to change my tone of voice to urge the people to listen to me. Oh…I don’t know about my mark…perhaps a seven, because it was good, the topic “original” but it was too short. What do you think?

(I have already corrected it!)